It felt as if the world was awakening alongside her. I find myself wondering—what has called her back? What force, what purpose? I'd love to read more of her story, to unravel the mystery surrounding her. Beautifully written!
This was excellent, Rachel! I love how quickly you set the stage for something truly epic. The imagery, as always, was also superb. I'll be sharing more on today's episode of my podcast!
Thank you SO much Bradley ! Means a lot coming from you. I’ve been out of town at my x father in law funeral. 😥. Been a tough week and this was a much needed surprise !
So mesmerizing Rachel. What a rich, cinematic blend of mystery, power, and ancient magic. The imagery is striking, evoking an ethereal, almost otherworldly atmosphere. The misty air, the unveiling of the henge, and the sorceress stepping into existence. It all reads like the beginning of a legend, a moment suspended between past and present.
I have to admit, I had to look up the word "henge". I hadn't thought of posting flash fiction or short pieces. Maybe I should try that, as I have tons "in the freezer" as I call it.
Very keats-esque imagery, beautiful. This had the rhythm of nature-poetry and the vibe of something colossal awakening. Thank you.
Thank you!! so much. 🙏
It felt as if the world was awakening alongside her. I find myself wondering—what has called her back? What force, what purpose? I'd love to read more of her story, to unravel the mystery surrounding her. Beautifully written!
Thank you my friend!!
It’s actually going to be made into a hand crafted book by a friend of mine who is an incredible bookmaker.
You can follow her on YouTube at Spirit of Nature Art.
I just have to finish the stories. Hopefully completed in the next few weeks.
👀👀👀👀 oohh loved this something to look forward to!!!
This was excellent, Rachel! I love how quickly you set the stage for something truly epic. The imagery, as always, was also superb. I'll be sharing more on today's episode of my podcast!
Thank you SO much Bradley ! Means a lot coming from you. I’ve been out of town at my x father in law funeral. 😥. Been a tough week and this was a much needed surprise !
Beautiful! I can’t wait to bring this to life 🤗🤗🤗
I can’t wait too!
Powerful writing Rachel!
Thank you Kathy!
gonna steal the word from Simone's comment: magical! ✨
🙏✨ thank you Claudia!
So mesmerizing Rachel. What a rich, cinematic blend of mystery, power, and ancient magic. The imagery is striking, evoking an ethereal, almost otherworldly atmosphere. The misty air, the unveiling of the henge, and the sorceress stepping into existence. It all reads like the beginning of a legend, a moment suspended between past and present.
Wow. Omg. Thank you Karen ! So much! 🙏✨
You are very welcome Rachel.
Beautiful visual writing. It was like one was standing there watching.
Thank you Kathleen
I have to admit, I had to look up the word "henge". I hadn't thought of posting flash fiction or short pieces. Maybe I should try that, as I have tons "in the freezer" as I call it.
Thaw them out and let us read!! 🤍
Beautiful and so magical, I could feel the scenery ✨🧡
Thank you Simone! 🙏
I love how detailed your writing is! You can literally feel like you are there in the story, seeing all that is going on!
Thank you so much!!
Right! I always tell her the same thing. She is very talented.
She is!
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